16 Nov

WCAD Walkthrough: Chapters 12 & 13 & 14

Chapter 12 divorced 11, and 13 and 14 don’t want to be separated because they’re fornicating, so you get a triple shot this week. Brace yourself; it’s going to be a wordy one.

Subjects touched upon herein: character arc, something in my eye, an overblown construction metaphor, flames on the side of my face, echoes, foreshadowing, stage-2 gardening, and touching up, on, here, and in because SMUTNASTY PORNYTIMES!


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